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Ten Black Roses

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I woke up one day
found your little gift
a beautiful black rose
next to me on your pillow

went to bathroom then
with bright thoughts about you
and found a black rose
on my dressing table

I was going to the kitchen
and there was a black rose
right on the brown floor
you made me smile again

making coffe i found one
black rose in the cupboard
I started to wondering
if it's some special day

another black rose was on chair
so I took it to my hand
and stared at it
during whole breakfast

I wasn't surprised
when I found one black rose
in my wardrobe
next to your favourite dress of mine

I dressed up and made up
went to took my shoes on
and found another black rose
under the door

I ran downstairs
hurry to work
and what I found?
another black rose from you

and then I saw the blood
in front of me on the street
you were lying there
with black rose in your hand

tenth rose I lied by myself
on your grave my dear
and tattooed a black rose
in my broken heart
Dedicated to :iconatimarap:
:hug:

Lots of mistakes
:hmm:
but I loved the idea
I don't know if it's good category
wharever
comment please
:)
inspiration from "Black Roses" album by The Rasmus
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Bandit-The-Hedgie's avatar
This is a very good poem. You could get very far. :meow:

I LOVE "Ten Black Roses"! :D